Review: Into the Pit

Into the Pit Into the Pit by Scott Cawthon
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

Story 1: Dylan Cooper is such a standard name for a bully. Anyway, I liked the whole time travelling back into the 80s thing and how eerie the animatronic was in this story.

4/5

Story 2: The protagonist literally insulted her childhood best friend. How could she!
Also, in general the whole beauty stuff and pretending to be someone you are not (not being individual) is so annoying and the characters also all felt shallow. Perhaps it was done on purpose to give the effect of how it is to pretend to be someone you aren't, which would be cool, but the whole topic made me roll my eyes constantly. The ending was also predictable.

1/5

Story 3: Millie the protagonist was hugely annoying. Thinking about the death as handsome (romantacising), but not wanting to eat meat as that's murder. Also, the whole self-pity was so unnecessary and made the character just more un-likeable.

"It would probably be better for my health to eat less meat anyway"

Not eating meat is NOT more healthy. We need meat to develop properly (especially for the brain) and it has in general stuff inside that your body needs that we don't find elsewhere.

Self-pity examples:
"I'm glad I'm not happy. Happy people are just lying to themselves.


"Homework was a misery. School was a misery. Her whole life was a misery."


But the story got better while reading and it felt like Millie had depression, so it wasn't really an excuse for her behaviour, but at least she had a reason for all this. Also one plus point for the ending to be something I always wanted to see/read about as a FNAF fan.

3/5

Total: 2.4 stars
Rounded up: 3 stars

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